Script improvement

Due to my privious script was hard to understand, our group members spent three days to improve my idea. And this is the first draft of our script, it is a combination of Ardi's idea and mine.



Script:
Characters: Emily, Emily’s sister
Scene one:
(Running Track)
Emily is standing on the racing track and looking forward (camera tracking around her, low angle)

Emily (V.O): My name is Emily, I am 24, and I am a relay race athlete. Five years ago I was almost dying….

Scene Two:
(Recollection)
Location: Ward

Emily is sitting on bed and reading her diary. Her tears drop down when seeing her pictures.

Emily (V/O): The unexpected diagnoses pushed me to the edge of death. I was suffering from the daily treatments. My doctor told me I had to wait for a new liver to live on. Because of the shortage of donors, I was like a canoe floating on the sea, and I had not idea when I can land. Both my family and me were despaired, the only thing always sustains me is my relay baton. I want to continue my life, I want to pass my baton on! But who can help me?

Emily feels painful, and her hand slowly moves to her liver position. She is weak and pale, she lies back and her diary drops off. She tries to approach her baton besides her.

Meanwhile, Emily’s sister opens the door and rushes in.

Sister: Emily! You have a new liver!

Emily looks at her sister, smiling.

An extreme close up on her eyes.
Scene Three
From her eyes, we can see the racing track.

Emily is smiling. She takes over the baton from her “Donor” and starts to run.

Emily(V.O): I don’t know who he is or even his name. He died in an accident and he was only 20. He passed his life to me, so I can keep running. I don’t know how far I can run, but I promise you my life saver, I will pass my life to the next person when I reach the end.
Scene Four:

Statistics:

Australia has one of the highest success rates in organ and tissue transplantation yet one of the lowest organ and tissue donation rates in the world.
Australias organ and tissue donation rate is approximately 10 donors per million of population most OECD countries have at least a 50% higher rate, some 100-200% higher.
There are currently 3,000 people (children and adults) on the official organ and tissue transplant waiting list in Australia waiting for a heart, kidney, lung, liver, pancreas or corneal transplant.
Of those waiting for a heart, lung or liver transplant, 20% will die before they receive one.
There are currently 8,000 people (children and adults) undergoing dialysis treatment in Australia. This number increases 6% each year. Only 1,500 make the official transplant waiting list for a kidney. Of those on the waiting list for a kidney the average wait is 4 years. It is considered futile to put the remaining 6,500 people on dialysis on the transplant waiting list as their chances of receiving a transplant would be very poor. There simply are not enough organ donors.
As many as 9 people can benefit from the organ and tissue donations of one person.
(Transplant Australia)

Scene Five:

Emily runs to us, passes her baton on…

Emily (V/O): I am an organ donor, are you?

END

Our campaign

In 2007, New release of advertisement coming soon...

It's a advertisement about Organ Donation, currently the idea will about Relay baton.
Organ Donation is a new campaign which is the cooperation of Media company Contact and Australian Healthy and Ageing department.

The media company "CONTACT" was estabilished in 2000 by Ardi, Faye, Jin and Shushu. The mission of Contact is "WE Contact..." we Contact everyone..contact the whole world.

Resently we cooperate with the Australian Healty and Ageing department to promote and encourge Australian young adults to register as a donator. The idea of the advertisement of mine is the relay baton, which means 'pass on your organ save lifes'. although, our slogan hasn't decide yet.

SCRIPT:

Charactors: Girl, Boy

Scene ONE
Location: Street
Boy and Girl pass on the street

Scene TWO

Location: Church

Girl parying in the church, suddently she fall down.

Scene THREE

Location: Hospital

(Ambulance Alarm)

The sickroom is dark and quiet...

Girl lie in a bed, pale and week. Her body is conneted by catheters with iatric machine, and beside her bed, her sister is holding a crucifix necklet and pary for girl.

Secene FOUR

Location: Running Track

Boy stand by on the running track, looks at the terminus, sweat drops, soon, he passes his baton to another person

(gun shoots)

Boy starts runing, and sweating.



Secene FIVE

Boy's Recollect

Location: anywhere

Boy standing and filling a register form, and circle "YES" under the question of "are you willing to be a donator" or similar questions.

Secene SIX

Location: Back to running track

Girl take over Boy's baton, and keep running

Secene SEVEN

Location: seats around the playground

Boy and Girl sitting and talking, they are so happy

Blur the secene, logo, slogan fade out

End

It's a new start

Alright, let me see....
From now on, my blog will totally change into a new content which is .......it will becomes my sememster 4's media production diary.

In this sememster we have to finish a major production project as a group. Basically the idea of our group's project will be about ORAGAN DONATION, and later I will be introduce our company and our idea.

The last podcast was finished

I am so exciting because we spend a whole day to think about the theme.
The stroy is wonderful..
The production is wonderful..
Especially the music, I love them..
The story was happen in the old days' China, a boy was left his lover for working outside the villiage. The girl waited for him for many years and hear nothing from him. So she found a rabbi, who is good on magic, looked for her boyfriend. However, her boyfriend was dead. Because she supplicated the rabbi with desperation, the rabbi promised her that she was allowed to exchange her boyfriend's body by paying her 20 years life. She did. But she discover that what did she get was a zombie, who has not feeling and emotion, only a body. Then the rabbi asked her to pay another 20 years to get his spirit back into his body, she did.
....


that's the beggining of the story,
if you want to know more about the story..

I am sorry to tell you,
I didn't figure out yet..

hoho~~~

Blog critique-Wan2's comic blog

Wan2's comic blog which is the most popular personaility blog in Taiwan's biggest blog website WRETCH.

"Wretch (Chinese: 無名小站) is a Taiwanese community web site, in Chinese, it's name means Anonymous Lil' Site or Nameless Lil' Station. It is the most famous web blog community in Taiwan with thousands of users registered now. Wretch provides free album, blog, and bbs hosting services. Four languages, including English, are available. A more extensive VIP version is offered. It is the top visited site in Traditional Chinese languages and the second in Taiwan after Yahoo! Taiwan according to Alexa." (wikipedia)

The blog was launch in October 2004, similar as other blogs, Wanwan2's comic blog was set up for Wanwan (blogger) recording her daily life. It is a Chinese blog as well as a art blog.

It became famous because of the cute cartoon character "Wanwan" (As shown in the picture). Actually Wanwan is the nickname of the blogger, she named the little cute figure Wanwan which as same as blogger's nick name because she is a artist and she created a simple cute figure which could represents her and use it to record her daily life.

As time goes, more and more people showed their interesting of her simple images and numbers of them use those images as MSN pictures. Many of my friends and I now are using her images (such as the left one) to express my daily moods and it is kind of fashion.

Wanwan2's comic blog has well designed which has pinky cartoon background with orange and light yellow navigation and blogging background. 'Cute' is the theme of the whole blog.

Wanwan's blog currently is a business rather than a personal journal blog, because as the growth of viewers and fans (More than 30 thousands perday and totall visiters currently is 102999127), Wanwan's pictures are published as a book. Therefore if you visit her blog today, her image journal may still, but you could find that there are many different categories of pictures which specially for different purpose such as MSN pictures. Does not like before, Wanwan's blog is much more like a business rather than a journal blog. And what I found that Wanwan is drawing a picture for her audience but not for herself. I can't see many personal feelings expect "I am happy, I went to ....". Before Wanwan became famous, audiences could read some articles which written by her, but now all things are about image althoug images are more easy to understand, but she is losing something.

Due to the situation of Wanwan2's comic blog which is a business, some of the author's pictures are under copy right, they are no more as free as before which people could download or use. The author Wanwan as famous as her figure now, and people sometimes can see her in some TV advertisement. In the future, the figure Wanwan may become a specific cartoon character as "Hello Kitty" and it is not surprise that if there is a company which own by Wanwan.

The Brave Archer

‘The Brave Archer' is a traditional Chinese novel which is written by a famous writer Jin Yong. His novels are all about Kongfu and legend of hero and quite popular in China. 'The Brave Archer' was became a serials drama in 1980s and it was really successful. Nowadays 'The Brave Archer' has retake by many other companies.

The lateast one is retake by CES. It's a good version which I could figure out from their feature which I am going to introduce to you. I like the scene which is the main charactor Guo Jin arching vultures. It's a hard scene that hard to control the horse and actore has to stand on a rearing on the hind legs horse.

Also, it is interesting that look at how people filming in different places. It crew is so huge, many different people in the crew doing different things. I can understand that how tough they are, because I have a simple experience in shooting few weeks ago, it is hard to arrange everything. Especially for this crew, because the main actor Hu Ge was suffered an accident that cause the shooting stopped for a year and waste millions dollars. Fortunately Hu Ge finally came back to the crew and continoune the shooting. From the following feature which I cite from the blog of "The Brave Archer“ I think you can see their hard working and some wonderful scenes

http://vhead.blog.sina.com.cn/player/outer_player.swf?auto=0&vid=6540884&uid=1249025265

Happy girl back!!

woooo..I went though the pressure and I am back!!!!
I was so unhappy last week because too much pressure. But everything finally finished on time! I feel so happy now. I want to say sorry everybody, because I am not transparency actually. Although, I still believe my poem is good..doesn't it?

hahaha..

Today, I recived 30 questions that I have to answer from my net friend. It is like a game, once you recive the questions you have to answer 29 of them, the one left which is the question you don't want to answer, and you have to create a new one to replace it. After you answer all those questions, you can pass those questions to your friends.

Here are the questions:
1.What is your most enjoy thing?
2. Do you think a broke up couple are still friends?
3.How do you know you are fall in love with someone?
4.What's your hatest thing?
5. Do you believe any promise?
6.What is your biggest wish now?
7.What do you want from your friends?
8.Do you like me?
9. Tell us a place you really want to go.
10.What is your problem currently?
11. Which part do you hate yourself mostly?
12.What kind of gift(ability) you want?
13.What is your happiest thing currently?
14.What do you do if you are upset?
15.What kind of life do you wish to have?
16.If I upset you, what are you going to do with me?
17.What is your favoure food?
18.How do you show your love to your lover?
19. Is that possible to forgive your enermy? How?
20.What kind of thing you appriciate to have?
21.How's your lover's personality?
22.If your Ex-girl (boy)friend come back to you, will you be with them?
23.What kind of words you don't want to hear while you are upset?
24.What sort of things you can't accept?
25.If your partner don't love you any more, but you still love her/him, what are you gonna to do?
26.Do you loving someone?
27.Make 3 wishes.
28.What things do you think they won't be change and you have to accept.
29.Would you like to pour water in a glass cup or a china cup?
30.You like boys or girls?

Am I transparent?

I think I am transparent, I am a small daisics standing with many others,
I think I am transparent, I am a drip of the sea,
Yes, I am transparent.
Cars pass me closely,
stranger cat went through my legs and did not care me,
people just ignore me unless they need me,
Yes, I am transparent.
Nobody care my effort although I put a lot on my work,
Nobody care my feeling even my heart was broken,
Nobody ask me any question even I was suffering difficulty,
Nobody see my tears even I was crying,
Yes, I am transparent.
I wanted to know am I transparent today, then I proved it.

I want to go to Taiwan

I want to go to Taiwan, coz I want to..
I want to meet Ocean my idol.
I want to eat many different things in their..night market.
I want to have fun.
Here is my plan,

Ocean doesn't know I am going to Taiwan, and I will give him a really big surprise in his birthday party!First of all, I will fly to south of Taiwan, then go to my friend home, she is Ocean's fan as me. Then she will bring me to Taipei without telling anyone, even other fans.I will pretent I am a new friend of them, then I will stay in the party. Oh,right, before this, I will send a card to Ocean before I go to Taiwan, my picture will attach in. But I'm sure he won't regonize me..untill I tell him.. hoho..perfect plan!

God bless me...my visa should be ok..

oh..a special day

Today, I lost my QQ..I have used it for about 6 years, and tonight I lost it~~I will lost contect with more than 100 people and including many net friend..oh..so cool..

The person, who stole my QQ, he ask me for 60yuan to buy my QQ back, but I am so sorry to him, I can't. I am not that stupid...Anyway, what's a pity..because I have had it for about 6 years..Hopefuly, it could be sale as a high price.

oh..another thing..

The shooting...the interviews are killing me !!!!!!
GOD, do I really have to type them out? really?!I can't believe that~~~~~~~~
I won't do any interview in my rest of my life!

but this time I joined 4 crews, and I have a lots of fun!

I decided !I want to be a producer or ..director!!!!!!!

A Gloomy week

A gloomy week
everything just un...un something, I don't know which word I could use.
low marks, surprisely.
a damm strange person keep sneer at me during these days, and I don't think I did anything bad to her.
down mood...just down.

Is that because the "Gloomy Sunday"? hoho..I am afriad.

I still worry about our topic, and my script. Anyway, it's funny and good. I should gain a good mark. Jin, trust me!!!!!

Stupid photography studio

I recived a phone call that asked me to take beautiful photoes which are free, and I showed up. Everything there were look so professional and fun. Professional dresser, professional make up stylists, professional photographer, and beautiful beautiful pictures. Also, they have beautiful girls working there, and they are just looked like model.

I was so exciting, and followed one of the stylists. She gave me a contrast and explain to me that their policies:
$95 security appoinment fee (if you don't show up, you will pay for that)

$395 deposit once you want those photoes (not matter how many pictures you want, you have to pay)

I don't know why I was so stupid that signed the contracst and joined the team to take photoes. After I showed the contrast to my friend and she only got one word to say: DISGUSTING! shit business, shit photographies because all of them could be made in photo shop and the beautiful pictures are not because of the photographer but the computer!

OK

Now, I like to show up to see my wonderful pictures and I will say to them, sorry, I don't have money to pay for that, see you, good bye!

By the way, I have to show the prices:

The cheapest price: 5''*4'' Chemical prints $198 (with GST), and the Digital Prints is $512 (with GST)---for ONE single picture

The highest price: $23,628 (with GST) for 21pics in different size.


My dear frineds, if next time you recived a phone call asking you to take free beautiful photoes, think about it.

Anyway, it is a good experience to be treated like a real star~

I have to be stronger

I have leave my parents to live overseas for five years, I was believe that I get used to it already. However, I don't. I could not control myself to cry whenever I know I will leave my family and live alone. I could not help to stop crying.

I have to be stronger, because my parents believe that I am a strong girl, and always happy. I have to be stronger because I have to survive in the society without asking for their help, like a gowrn little bird could fly without its mum's help. I have to be stronger because I could finish my study as soon as possible and go back to meet everyone I miss with.

Now, I just stopped crying. I know I can do that and I make it.

My art work

Today Jin saw my art work and encourage me to put it in my blog..now I do so. These two art works are finished last year just before I graduated from Taylors College.

This is my favorie art work. The nude figure is representing myself who's a girl living under pressure and fear. The cat, which is black, is a symbol of fear because I do not like black cats, also, black cats sometimes represent the mystery.

This art work is a little bit dirty..hehe..because those things which around the box are made by gum which was chewed by myself.

"Help" is the name of it. This and the previous art work are both from a same idea of a same collection. This one is the continuation of the previous one. The white hand is me who drowned in the saliva which made by glass pieces.

I am asking for help because I am almost drown in the people's saliva. The life is hard because I have to care everyone, I want to be free, and I hate my family care how people think of me.

The purest sound-Ocean

Ocean, my favorie singer. He is a start in my heart because he is a very kind person. He grew up in a single parent family, his mom is a Taiwan aborigines. His mom met his father who's a China mainland soldier in Taiwan, then his mother gave birth to four children. Unfortunetly, facts may always are cruel, because his father acturally has another family in China mainland. Later, his father was went back to China mainland and his mother grow them up by herself.

Ocean loves his mother so much, so in his third album, there is a song call "Mom's old love song", singing about his mother and father's love story. We saw he weep over the story while he singing this song.

I like his songs because his songs are unique. I like his songs which are feel so pure and relex. I smile when I heard his songs, and I will close my eyes to enjoy in. In the third album, there are so many style songs in there which like pop, R&B, Chinese traditional style, and balladry.

Most importantly, my friend will mail me his new album for my birthday gift!

The Hi Rise Art and Dance Center

The Hi Rise Dance Center, One of the most nice places I love to go and relex. I can find myself there, because I can release myself through dancing. I have been there for a year, during this year I met many people and proving my communication skills. Most importantly I met Rachel and Stefan, they give me a lot of help that makes me feel so warm.

It is a nice place to go, it has as many dances class you can choose and learn to be young. I've learned Hip-pop, samba, Krump, and Jazz. I enjoy in dance, and I enjoy to show myself in front of the mirror. I feel much more comfortable and confident after learn dance there. Also, I feel I become healthier, because I am doing exercise.

I started to bring my friends there, soonly Rachel met sherry, Jin, Ada, and Aya. They are enjoy there as me. They found a place to lose weight, more than that, with these people in Hi Rise, we are getting closer and be good friends.

However, a bad news hitted on my head last night. Rachel told me that Hi Rise, my favory place, is going to close up because the large amount of rental. I feel so sorry to hear that. I don't want it to close. So, people, come come, to the Hi Rise Center to dance or Exhibite your art work ,come come! Just Come!!

Thank you all~

It is a special week for me.

My birthday party is on Sunday. I am not going to describe my partyhere, what I like to say is, thank you all my dear friends! I can't believe and never receive gifts and wishes as many as this birthda . It really moves me. I will keep these forever.

I am that kind of person who's not good at say thank you, I have tried my best to tell you guys I really love you. You know what? Two weeks ago I was planning to celebrate my birthday alone or, with my flatmate, and you guys give me a very big surprise!

That's all I want to say. Thank you!

I only have a birthday wish, which is ALL MY WISHES WILL COME TRUE!! ^-^

Besides, I like to thanks my mom, althoug she couldn't read this blog. I miss her so much and love her forever. My dad is a good person, and I hope one day he can gives himself a break and take a rest, because he works to hard. My baby brother, please please please grow up quickly!

Birthday is coming

So exciting...

Many people will come and celebrate with me

The most important thing is ... My family will come and meet me!

But...only two night..

I miss my family, and my little youg cousin, he still looking for me every time when he comes to my home..oh..the little boy..he is so cute..

Anyway, I will go back next year..and ..our wonderful plan>>

Travel to the Great Barrier Reef in SEP

Travel to Singapore in Jun..

Go back to China...

woo..my happy life!

Have you ever think about...

How's the earth looks like if human disappear?
What do you feel after you die?
Are ghosts exist?

I believe in something, but I can't say I have belifs, I am not sure what I believe in.

I feel so confuse, because I believe in fortune telling, but I also believe that I can make my own future.

Which one is ture?

Are ghosts exist? I believe it when I would like to believe in it. I don't believe it when I scaring.

I will believe fortune teller when he/she tells me I have a wonderful future, and I don't believe them when they tell me I gonna in trouble tommrow.

I think I still can see everyone after I die, or, I will go to another world which is totally different as the world I living now.

The earth will be still when human disappear or, it will disappear with human due to the artificial ruin

Women have no right to talk about politics?

There was a man, he said women have no right to talk about politics as men never step into the kitchen...

rubbish....

I hate that kinds of men discreminate women..

and now..I am thinking his mother, poor.. so poor..

oh! I remember one thing he said to me,

"you are so sad, cause you don't even know how sad you are."

thanks God, I am a happy girl, because I never know what is sad..


happy~~~~~~~~

29-06-07, A continuous dream

Last night, I had 3 dreams. I felt so strange, because they were like a soap opera....

SCENE ONE:

"Faye! Come on, look at him! He is sooooo handsome!" my roommate lynn waved me to come infront of the window. She looks so excited.

"Who's that?" I went to her and tried to find the one she's crazy about.

There was a boy walking in the corridor. He was wearing a white long sleeves shirt which I could see through his sturdy body and muscles. He is so handsome, undoubtly. I bet everyone will say that . He just like a star shining in the blue sky. Although it is day time now, you still can see his brighting smile.

"I want to ask him out!" I can't believe she would said that.

"Are you sure?" I felt so guity.

"Why not? I want him! I know I want him!"

"OK." I felt guity, but I don't know why. But I can't stop her.

"He will be my man. I believe that."

....


SCENE TWO:

He was standing infront of the window of the gloomy libary.

I went close to him quietly.

He suddenly turned around and faced to me. We were so close, I could feel he is breathing. He looked at me, I can see his tears, through his gray eyes. His skin just like a baby, soft and without any blemishes. How a perfect man!

And look at me, I am a girl as normal as others. Besides, I am so fat, I just looked like a ball when I be with him.

He holded me tightly and said: " I miss you so much, baby, I miss you."

I was so happy that I am such a lucky girl. Meanwhile, I felt guity.

"I miss you too，”I told him, "but we couldn't be together, my best friend she want to be with you too! And..and.. she said she must have you, but ..I .. I love you." I started to cry.

Unexpectedly, he ran away from me....


SCENE THREE:

I rushed out of the libary and tried to catch up, but he just disappear.

Where he is? Where does he go?

I turn around, and I see he is walking in the other building. I started to run, and I have to stop him!

When I went up staires in the other building, there were two students on my way. I want to ignore them just because I have not time to say hello.

"stop!" one of them shouted at me and stand infront of me. He is holding a knife.

"why?"I didn't understand.

"Don't you see us?"

"Should I say hi? I don't think so. And, I don't have time. Please just let me go."

"How dare you talk to us like this?!"

"Come on dud, stop that. She is our mate" The other guy said.

"So what? She has to pay for her impoliteness." He tried to threat me by using his knife.

"Watch your mouth!I have everything you got!" I had a knife too, althought I don't know when and why I bring a knife with me.

I took out my knife, pushed up his arm and quickly turn and that guy's arm got a scratch, possiblely it was because my knife.

Then, I ran again, don't try to stop me, woman is not as weak as you think!

I want him, I want to talk to him!

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The end..


This is my dream, OK, I dreamed a handsome guy. OK, I am so happy.

But it is weird because I woke up three times and my dream was continue.

Please understand it is hard to write as a writer..

coz..my terriable gramma won't allow me to ...be ..a ..writer..


ooooooh..finally, finish..my first dream record~

oooooh,first post

It has to be special! That's why it is the only thing I want to say here, Ok, the end~